FAMEPedia:Cleanup

2021 posts
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March

 * List of golf courses in the United Kingdom – After and per the AfD discussion, I cleaned-up the article of red links and moved them to the talk page here, within the Extended content collapse box. However, redirects to non-golf course articles are still in place, and some, but not all, at the AfD discussion opined for the redirects to be removed as well. North America1000 10:54, 3 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Timeline of the liberation of France - The table needs a lot of fixing to bring the columns into line that are way beyond my meager skills. MarnetteD&#124;Talk 20:00, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Jammu and Kashmir Awami League - too long lead. Written like an essay. In the need to have sections. – Kammill  ⟨talk⟩ 17:10, 1 March 2021 (UTC)

February

 * Manuel Fal Conde - This article has multiple issues, it has a non-academic writing style, the chronology of this article is hard to follow, there are several grammatical or spelling errors. I think this article was translated from Spanish by a non-native speaker of English, as several definite articles are missing. Xwedodah (talk) 03:52, 28 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Sound an Alarm - the article needs copy editing as the text is not encyclopedic. Also I was wondering if it needs name change. Less Unless (talk) 14:43, 27 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Thecho - Some sections are like lists. They need to be converted into the prose. Further, the article is unreferenced and citations should be added. – Kammill  ⟨talk⟩ 08:51, 27 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Marcelo Salas - this is an article about a very important footballer, but it is poorly written, and it seems like many parts were translated from Spanish literally. The intro seems to be too long and has too much information, some of it of dubious importance.--Celtic1985 (talk) 14:59, 26 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Jessica Hammond (politician) - too many links in external links section - needs shortening, now it looks like the author tried too hard.Less Unless (talk) 19:19, 25 February 2021 (UTC)
 * removed some promotional content and trivia as well as multiple YouTube and Facebook links to her speeches. A lot more cleanup is needed. The is an unsuccessful local politician, the article should be 50% shorter. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 19:15, 26 February 2021 (UTC)


 * List of New York City Ballet dancers - poorly referenced, horrible citation style, many links redirects back to the article itself. Corachow (talk) 23:47, 24 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Mostly fixed citation style (see diff), but didn't add any sources and article is still terrible. 🐈 cAtte_ · talk · contributions · 07:15, 1 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Jan Metternich - German singer. Looks like FP:TOOSOON, but I may be wrong. Too many details. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 21:26, 24 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Jasmine Dotiwala - British media executive. Article strays wildly from areas where the subject may be regarded as notable. Content is largely promotional & poorly structured. Stroness (talk) 19:41, 24 February 2021 (UTC)
 * trimmed down promotion, added citation requests. A lot more cleanup is needed. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 18:37, 27 February 2021 (UTC)


 * Peter Gordon Hines (Civil Engineer) - British civil engineer. I am not sure that he is notable, the article looks like an original research. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 16:56, 19 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Grapevine (disk magazine) - An independent floppy-disk based magazine for the Amiga. Original research and tone issues. Waxworker (talk) 18:26, 18 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Outcast (magazine) - A defunct LGBT magazine from the early 2000's. Original research and tone issues. Waxworker (talk) 19:09, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Karen (pejorative) - some clean up needed, specifically in the "notable examples" section, where sentence structure, wording, and some grammar adjustments need improvement. Tinton5 (talk) 04:10, 14 February 2021 (UTC)
 * University of Luxembourg - Absolute mess of an article, uncited and very biased. Absolutely in need of cleanup. Ardenter (talk) 16:11, 12 February 2021 (UTC)
 * shortened lead section. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:10, 12 February 2021 (UTC)


 * Abkhazian Armed Forces – The lead is very short. Needs expansion. North America1000 13:23, 10 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Izabela Wagner - European sociologist. She is probably notable (there are mentions of her research on Zygmunt Bauman, but the article itself is all original research and promotion. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 18:12, 9 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Peepal Khoont - Unencylopedic, in the need to be rewritten. – Kamil Ali   17:31, 7 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Lomaloma - A giant and bulky article should be rewritten. – Kamil Ali   17:26, 5 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Annalee Skarin – needs significant concision. KidAd   talk  03:00, 5 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba the Movie: Mugen Train — lots of unsourced/poorly sourced information, doesn't conform with MOS:FILM with too many sections/tables that do not belong. Alex Tenshi (talk&#124;contribs) 15:43, 3 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Benjamín Kuscevic – needs major (language) improvements. --LH7605 (talk) 00:35, 3 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Rander - Cleanup-tagged since 2012, inappropriate references, almost all of it is copy-pasted from another source. Needs a giant overhaul. Phantasm99 (talk) 17:16, 2 February 2021 (UTC)
 * - Kamil Ali Bhat (talk) 19:04, 2 February 2021 (UTC)


 * Nardo Zalko - a journalist and tango historian. Lead section is too long. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 17:07, 1 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Put most of the lead in a separate section. Still needs a fair bit of copyediting and cleanup. -- Awker22  ( talk ) 19:56, 2 February 2021 (UTC)


 * List of Tom and Jerry characters - List of characters in the cartoon Tom and Jerry. Massive amount of uncited fancruft and outright false information, such as giving names to unnamed characters and listing brief visual gags as a character in of themselves, as well as odd non-sequitur statements such as "There is some debate as to whether this is the genuine Clint Clobber as the original Clint would never be an outright animal abuser; he was just a put-upon grouch". A lot of the false information given seems to also be on the Tom & Jerry fandom wiki. Waxworker (talk) 07:42, 1 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Not all of it may be false information. There are nicknames to almost all the characters in the Tom and Jerry universe, so it's possible someone heard about these nicknames and put them in the page. So I would keep the normally unnamed characters in, but remove the breif visual gag characters as you said. Phantasm99 (talk) 18:50, 1 February 2021 (UTC)

January

 * Keroche Breweries - Kenian brewery. Promotional and needs shortening. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 14:37, 31 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Zotung language - Full of broken tables, grammatical errors and incorrect style. pinktoebeans  (talk) 12:41, 31 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Nate Miley - Californian politician, member of the Alameda County Board of Supervisors. The article if overly detailed and the language is promotional. I trimmed down some puffery, but a lot more editing (shortening) is needed. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 10:15, 31 January 2021 (UTC)
 * ❌ after FP:Articles for deletion/Nate Miley.  PJvanMill ) talk ( 21:19, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Children of the Lamp - A children's fantasy novel series. Lots of uncited fancruft and tone issues. Waxworker (talk) 04:48, 30 January 2021 (UTC)
 * List of countries by tax rates - I've had a good go at the articles listed on this article, but they're almost all in a poor shape so any effort you can give to to just one or two articles would greatly help. Kind regards, Willbb234Talk (please &#123;&#123;ping&#125;&#125; me in replies) 22:22, 28 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Blue Valley Creamery Company – Cleanup-tagged since December 2018 with the rationale, "excessive quotes in references". North America1000 10:57, 27 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Removed some trivia and extra quotes. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 21:04, 31 January 2021 (UTC)


 * The Licktators – Cleanup-tagged since October 2017 with the rationale, "Strange flow, weird descriptions and details, reads more like an Uncyclopedia article". North America1000 10:57, 27 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Removed a bunch of unsourced and irrelevant content.Arigatō tokoro (talk) 09:08, 4 February 2021 (UTC)


 * Pyaaj Kachori – Stub that needs copy editing. North America1000 09:17, 27 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Stefano Fantoni - Italian theoretical physicist. Multiple issues highlighted with tags. Needs to be shortened at least by 50%. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 17:39, 26 January 2021 (UTC)
 * cleaned up everything related to the refs. Still needs to be substantially shortened. Not my field of expertise. Less Unless (talk) 20:26, 28 January 2021 (UTC)
 * shortened lead section a bit. The article needs expert attention to evaluate scientific content. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 17:31, 29 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Foley Downtown Historic District - Historic district on the NRHP. Bizarre phrasing, paragraph breaks, lists in paragraph/sentence form, line breaks for citations, and lack of punctuation. twink central (talk)
 * - Fixed up punctuation issues and removed some archaic phrases and a red link. Don't know what to do with the lists, though. Phantasm99 (talk) 14:54, 26 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Lee Labrada - Cuban bodybuilder. Too commercial, and has no references. Will also need to be split into multiple sections since it is too hard to read. May also include original research. -- Phantasm99 (talk)
 * Nuclear power in the United States - nothing terrible, just a LOT of duplicate links.  SnazzyInfinity (chat? • what I've done) 19:01, 19 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Ceyhun Yılmaz - a Turkish comedian, actor, radioman and TV presenter - needs general clean up and links removed to non-existent pages --Miriumjenkins (talk) 14:22, 15 January 2021 (UTC)
 * general clean up -- MarialeegRVT (talk) 06:06, 25 January 2021 (UTC)]]


 * Ratnipora - Village in Jammu and Kashmir, India, In the need of some general clean up and structuring.- 5:11, 15 January 2021(UTC)
 * Zoya Agarwal - Air India female pilot. FP:REFBOMB and FP:PROMO. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 17:29, 13 January 2021 (UTC)
 * removed some most obvious cases of FP:REFBOMB. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 17:28, 20 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Teresa N. Washington - an African American academic. Original research, over-detailed. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 13:49, 9 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Michel Platnic - Israeli contemporary artist. Probably notable. The article looks like FP:ORIGINAL and needs shortening. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:17, 7 January 2021 (UTC)

December

 * Fighter Interception Unit - Blocky unsourced mess  SnazzyInfinity (chat? • what I've done) 05:21, 29 December 2020 (UTC)
 * Victor Mbarika - an American professor. Flagged for COI. --Opeinioluwa101 (talk)
 * Engrish - tons of unsourced and irrelevant stuff. DemonDays64 (talk) 09:11, 24 December 2020 (UTC)
 * Joanne Wilson - US venture investor. It is a properly stated FP:COI contribution. Here is an opinion from DGG: "I can't help thinking that the article is considerably excessive in view of the accomplishments. Perhaps it could be fixed by not including mere listings as awards, (and converting the table into a list--because of accessability problems tables as deprecated unless necessary), i moving those items in the bibliography that discuss her into references in the usual format, and possible decreasing the rather extreme number of references, too many of which are barely disguised PR, and from sources which are mainly devoted to publishing press releases" (expressed here). -- --Bbarmadillo (talk) 18:51, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
 * List of the first LGBT holders of political offices in the United States — tons and tons of unreferenced claims open to lawsuits. Needs fixing ASAP. DemonDays64 (talk) 09:58, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
 * Belen High School – In need of general cleanup and structuring. KidAd   talk  19:10, 19 December 2020 (UTC)
 * - Added infobox and restructured athletics, but ran out of reliable citations for the remaining sections TimSmit (talk) 00:25, 21 December 2020 (UTC)


 * LGBT movements in the United States - issues with tone, organization of sections, multiple sections need to be condensed WhirlWithoutEnd (talk) 06:52, 7 December 2020 (UTC)
 * - Misc fixes. —  W ILD S TAR  talk  17:24, 13 December 2020 (UTC)


 * Animal Rights National Conference - I removed some of the more promotional areas, but could use another editor's review. Animal Rights Hall of Fame section I wasn't sure if that should be removed. Once cleaned up, I think the Advert. tag could be removed. Rievebug (talk) 19:38, 3 December 2020 (UTC)
 * Removed the Advert tag. The article does not have a promotional tone at this time. North America1000 11:00, 27 January 2021 (UTC)

November

 * Otorhinolaryngology (for user:science vol, who asked for help on project talk) - style and readability problems.  PJvanMill ) talk ( 22:37, 24 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Shaun Pizzonia - US music producer. The style of the article is somewhat promotional. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 11:46, 15 November 2020 (UTC)
 * SnazzyInfinity (talk • contribs) 20:26, 22 November 2020 (UTC)


 * Technische Hochschule Ingolstadt - University of applied sciences in Germany. Lists with years should be turned to prose, the content should be shortened to remove trivia, references can be improved. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 19:14, 14 November 2020 (UTC)
 * ❌ I do not think this article can be saved, and consequently I've (re-)nominated it for deletion.  PJvanMill ) talk ( 15:26, 17 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Result: kept. Sources were found.  PJvanMill ) talk ( 18:29, 25 November 2020 (UTC)
 * in my experience, all pages for genuine European universities with a significant history can be rescued fairly easily. Other areas can be much harder to find sources.  DGG ( talk ) 21:14, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
 * - Style/layout fixes. —  W ILD S TAR  talk  16:32, 11 December 2020 (UTC)


 * Martha Clarke - puffery, long lead section. Corachow (talk) 18:22, 13 November 2020 (UTC)
 * by RandomWookiee and Bbarmadillo. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 18:29, 30 December 2020 (UTC)


 * Picture This (film) – stylistic cleanup overall needed, excessively long plot, inadequate amounts of sources, and the "critical reception" section is incomplete. Rosalina2427  (talk) 17:35, 2 November 2020 (UTC)
 * - Condensed plot Jennablurrs 7575  (talk) 20:49, 27 December 2020 (UTC)

October

 * Secretlab - gaming furniture manufacturer. The style of the article is promotional. It also contains a lot of trivial details. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 18:47, 30 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Trimmed some promotional. Partnerships section still too long. ThinkHat (talk) 17:16, 14 December 2020 (UTC)
 * . Also the types of chairs, reception, and awards. I may list this for deletion as basically advertising.  DGG ( talk ) 21:45, 21 December 2020 (UTC)


 * Box 13 scandal — very poor writing, unencyclopedic tone. DemonDays64 (talk) 09:47, 12 October 2020 (UTC)
 * HeyItsFedor (talk) 13:32, 21 October 2020 (UTC)


 * Lost Tribe – the introduction and discography need major fixing Lacon432 (talk) 21:07, 6 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Alexandra Ansanelli - American ballet dancer. Excessively detailed, poorly sourced and unclear citation style. I'll work on the contents at some point. Corachow (talk) 15:28, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Trimmed some of the excessive detail. Removed blank refs. Needs a rewrite in the career section. ThinkHat (talk) 22:06, 7 January 2021 (UTC)

September

 * Eurocon seems to be FP:INDISCRIMINATE—it lists all awardees at all award events in tables. The content about the awards themselves is relatively small. —I&#39;llbeyourbeach (talk) 06:20, 24 September 2020 (UTC)
 * Trans-Karakoram Tract - A region administered by China. It has a lot of mistakes and factual errors and is in need of more citations and generally more citations . Taimoorahmed11 (talk) 12:37, 13 September 2020 (UTC)
 * Struck part of the above, because this project no longer accepts requests for the addition of citations. North America1000 23:46, 11 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Tschaikovsky Pas de Deux - 1960 ballet. Some sources are dead, and some content seems to be irrelevant. I'll work on the "notable performers" section at some point, maybe other parts of the article too. And if you're wondering the spelling of the title is intentional. Corachow (talk) 15:15, 12 September 2020 (UTC)

August

 * Dissolution of the Soviet Union - requires citations, condensing, and stylistic cleanup, failure to maintain NPOV - see talk page for full complaints and a couple of examples. Strawberryfire (talk) 23:09, 28 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Strawberryfire and AussieWikiDan: this project generally does not add more sources to articles. I've struck that part of both of your requests. Kind regards from  PJvanMill ) talk ( 21:49, 28 August 2020 (UTC)


 * Prophethood (Ahmadiyya) - MOS capitalising, requires more citations and possible removal of content, original research issue. AussieWikiDan (talk) 13:09, 25 August 2020 (UTC)
 * History of Dubai - Opening paragraph about UAE instead. Poor use of citations.AussieWikiDan (talk) 13:07, 25 August 2020 (UTC)
 * BT Sport - there are needlessly long lists of presenters on here. It's just lines and lines of names, like a register! Please either remove most names, create a new article listing the presenters or put them into a table. Thanks! Mrmariomaster (talk) 20:37, 19 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Zhou Shen - Please fix grammar and prose in this article if necessary. Some sentences do not have citations, so maybe add "citations needed" if necessary. Article may be praising the living person at times, instead of maintaining neutral point of view. I've done some edits and will continue to do so but would like some help. Thanks! GhostHuang&#39;sFan (talk) 07:28, 17 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Cherkizovo – Thourough clean-up required – for details see there.--Hildeoc (talk) 08:25, 15 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Shooting and crying - poorly written, needs a grammatical and syntactical cleanup. Sk96sk (talk) 13:34, 13 August 2020 (UTC)
 * fixed footnotes, minor grammar changes (talk) 6:25, 18 August 2020 (UTC)
 * - Minor layout/format fixes, fixed error in quote, fixed references with citation errors. —  W ILD S TAR  talk  16:52, 23 November 2020 (UTC)


 * Amrou Al-Kadhi, this bio needs some copy-editing clean-up. Convert bare references. And maybe move Filmography and tv listings into a Filmography section. Gleeanon409 (talk) 01:02, 13 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Fixed bare references. Rievebug (talk) 19:12, 3 December 2020 (UTC)


 * Cleavage (breasts) has many citations but very little use of appropriate cite syntax. Can someone help? Aditya (talk • contribs) 02:51, 2 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Jill Garner - a list of sources needs to be turned into inline citations and external links. Less Unless (talk) 20:02, 10 August 2020 (UTC)
 * At this time, the article has no lists of sources or external links, having only inline citations at this time (diff). North America1000 01:47, 7 December 2020 (UTC)
 * ❌ Northamerica1000, note that the "list of sources" mentioned was in fact a heap of inline citations dumped right before the References section (see here). I've unstruck, as there is still something left of this heap, and there is still a lot of uncited material in the article.  PJvanMill ) talk ( 16:44, 7 December 2020 (UTC)


 * Mir Osman Ali Khan – Would benefit from a general cleanup. --Emir of FAMEPedia (talk) 16:59, 8 August 2020 (UTC)
 * FYI. --Emir of FAMEPedia (talk) 16:59, 8 August 2020 (UTC)


 * Oklahoma City Boulevard - A couple of statements have missing sources and a section needs to be up-to-date. AlphaBeta135 (talk) 14:06, 5 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Struck part of the nomination above, because this project does not accept requests for additional sources. North America1000 02:08, 13 August 2020 (UTC)


 * Remote control - bare URL in references and some general clean up needed, per banner at top. Tinton5 (talk) 06:59, 1 August 2020 (UTC)
 * converted the urls Less Unless (talk) 14:42, 1 August 2020 (UTC)

July

 * Cec Purves - A named reference is invoked but not defined. It may be available in the Revision history of earlier article versions. North America1000 15:46, 30 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Judith Forrai External links section needs formatting (bare urls).Less Unless (talk) 14:45, 30 July 2020 (UTC)
 * by Bbarmadillo. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 18:14, 6 November 2020 (UTC)


 * Adventure therapy Theory and Effectiveness sections are overlong, filled with repetitive references to studies, and there are too many citations, making for a difficult article to read. Probably needs a more concise rewrite. werewolf (talk) 05:18, 26 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Draft:Muslim Disability Awareness Can some clean up the page — Preceding unsigned comment added by IrishDonovan (talk • contribs) 13:52, 22 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Autonomous building - lack of inline refs and doesn’t seem to flow right (to me, at least). It just feels off. Firestarforever (talk) 02:24, 19 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Aleksander Vinter discography - the way this page looks like is all messed up and disorganized. Incomplete tables and a lack of quotations for song names and organization are very prevalent here. Lacon432 (talk) 14:34, 15 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Women in Turkmenistan - Tone and style need overhauling. Article is occasionally opinionated, lacking in structure and prose is rather informal. KaterFindus (talk) 22:33, 14 July 2020 (UTC)
 * I mostly rewrote the article due to major bias issues and a lot of unsourced material. I'll probably continue working on it for a bit longer. Would appreciate feedback! Thanks, Ovinus (talk) 20:25, 23 July 2020 (UTC)
 * references with bare URLs, minor spelling error, additional contributions by PJvanMill, Northamerica1000, and others. —  W ILD S TAR  talk  04:09, 24 July 2020 (UTC)


 * C. H. Gonda - general clean up needed, spacing, grammar, citation style fixes. Tinton5 (talk) 04:21, 10 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Lumix Da Don - reads like a fan-written piece, lots of puffery.Less Unless (talk) 11:07, 8 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Asiacentrism - Article appears to be self-promotion of a small group of academics, although the topic has much broader meaning and use. Pieceofmetalwork (talk) 10:37, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

June

 * Wallace Craig - list of sources needs to be reorganized into refs and external links.Less Unless (talk) 10:13, 30 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Ovation Brands – some promotional content, a section in list format, missing a few citations . Rosalina2427  (talk page here) 02:16, 30 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Struck part of the above, because this project no longer accepts requests for the addition of citations. North America1000 23:48, 11 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Murdered for Being Different - some help cleaning up this page would be most appreciated. It is mostly in regards to improving the wording of the article, grammatical corrections and improvements, and minor issues such as the same page being linked more than once etc. Helper201 (talk) 21:43, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
 * I've identified some other issues: parts of it read as if they were written by a fan. I'm done with the lead section. PJvanMill  ( talk ) 21:55, 1 July 2020 (UTC)


 * Anton Solomoukha - This article has a lot of strange and awkward wording (possibly written by someone whose second language is English). Lengthy sentences, article misuse, and tense inconsistencies are the main problems. Triethylborane (talk) 23:26, 17 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Added more refs as there was only 1 Less Unless (talk) 11:04, 18 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Corrected grammar and sentence structures; removed one redundant section as well as some unnecessary or unusable external links. werewolf (talk) 03:40, 6 July 2020 (UTC)


 * Gummibär - A German virtual singer CGI gummy bear, primarily known for I'm a Gummy Bear (The Gummy Bear Song). Excessive fancruft and tone and grammar issues, the episode descriptions for the cartoon based on the character in particular stike me as being written by a young fan, and they require serious rewriting. Waxworker (talk) 15:33, 17 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Cleaned up part of the web series section, which has the most issues. Rosalina2427  (talk to me) 18:53, 17 June 2020 (UTC)


 * Grading systems by country - this article is extremely long, poorly sourced, has numerous grammatical errors, and uses inconsistent formatting from section to section. Mysteryman blue 07:09, 16 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Corrected grammar, made formatting more consistent (and added tables), removed irrelevant details. Ashpie007 (talk) 19:36, 12 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Creatures (1990 video game) - A 1990 platforming game with cartoon-y graphics contrasted by scenes of torture. Formatting & tone issues, plot is described in an in-universe style. Waxworker (talk) 18:17, 15 June 2020 (UTC)
 * ❌ As the article cites no sources, and I don't seem to be able to find anything better, I've nominated it for deletion. PJvanMill (talk) 22:20, 19 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Deletion discussion is going to be a keep. Should have looked better. PJvanMill (talk) 14:15, 21 June 2020 (UTC)


 * Jason Altmire - Page involved in edit war based upon FP:RS and FP:MOS edits and clean up notice was issued. In doing the cleanup, the cleanup editor should also review the material in dispute, which is legitimate and RS and has been removed/restored en bloc multiple times today. EdwardsCluaser (talk) 18:11, 12 June 2020 (UTC)
 * - References cleaned-up. --  W ILD S TAR  talk  20:38, 12 June 2020 (UTC)


 * Chiller (video game) - A controversial 1986 light gun arcade game wherein the player takes the role of a torturer; the game's notible for its gore. Possible original research, and the article needs more citations; i've already removed some citations from unprofessional sources such as blogs. Waxworker (talk) 02:21, 7 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Afternoon of a Faun (Robbins) - 1958 ballet. Revival and other companies sections are unreferenced and has formatting issues, should be either removed or reformatted. There had been revivals every few years and the ballet is performed by many companies so my stance is to remove the two sections. Corachow (talk) 16:08, 4 June 2020 (UTC)
 * - Formatting done by myself and Corachow. Ghostofakina (talk) 19:40, 4 June 2020 (UTC)


 * A Midsummer Night's Dream (ballet) - the revival section is unreferenced and has formatting issues. I think it has to be reformatted or removed. Corachow (talk) 15:33, 4 June 2020 (UTC)
 * - I put the revival section in a table to fix the formatting and found one reference naming members of the original cast but this section needs more references Miriumjenkins (talk) 16:52, 4 June 2020 (UTC)


 * Bolo (1987 video game) - A 1987 multiplayer tank strategy game, and an early game with networking capabilities. Uncited fancruft, and the articles only sources are two primary sources from the creator of the Macintosh port of the game. Waxworker (talk) 01:23, 3 June 2020 (UTC)
 * I've found a secondary source, which is in "Further reading" for now. I've removed most of the fancruft. It still needs a lot more citations, but many claims in the article could be backed up adequately by a primary source. PJvanMill (talk) 19:12, 5 June 2020 (UTC)


 * African diaspora I've never seen such a jumbled mess of wikitext in my life! Is there no source code editors here any more? You can't even find the lead because of a run on infobox.  Is there a cleanup bot that can be run on this?  Has many more issues like self-definition the the word disaspora (not in Chromium dictionary but neither was "disproven") and I stopped there and went to the talk page then made a clarifying edit.  Jimbo's talk page was promoting the wikiproject with same name so i went there to find out what the word meant. Technophant (talk) 21:26, 2 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Christine Shevchenko - Ukrainian-American ballet dancer. The page has many unreliable sources, mainly from blogs and forums, had been cleaned up twice before but was added again, with the unreliable source tag removed by the editor who place those sources back. Also some tone issues in the career section. Corachow (talk) 03:40, 2 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Cleaned up sources again. Details may need condensing. ThinkHat (talk) 16:28, 3 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks, I actually think the career section can be expanded a little bit, considering her accomplishments, but the early life section has to be trimmed. My earlier attempts had been removed. Corachow (talk) 00:46, 4 June 2020 (UTC)
 * I cleaned up some grammar and made some details more concise, removing a few I deemed irrelevant. Not sure if more fixing is desired. If no more is, consider this page done. Triethylborane (talk) 17:21, 12 June 2020 (UTC)


 * The Ballad of Songbirds and Snakes – excessively long plot. I've already tried compressing the first half but there's extremely excessive details that could use some help cleaning up. Rosalina2427  (talk to me) 04:04, 1 June 2020 (UTC)
 * List of warez groups - A list of warez groups, which publish pirated/cracked content. This article has a serious issue: the site 'defacto2' is used extensively throughout the article, but the site is now usurped and links to straight-up malware that MalwareBytes identifies as a trojan. Many of the links are permanent dead links as well. Waxworker (talk) 01:26, 1 June 2020 (UTC)

May

 * Hunter (video game) - A 1991 video game using procedurally generated 3D graphics. The gameplay & reception sections read as being written by a fan, and gameplay appears as original research due to this and the lack of inline citations in it. I've already done some work on this article in improving its citations to have archive.org links and such. Waxworker (talk) 18:47, 31 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Team Yankee - A fictional 1987 war novel. Formatting issues, consists primarily of a long plot summary, lack of inline citations. Citations are bare URLs. Waxworker (talk) 17:23, 23 May 2020 (UTC)
 * converted urls, marked 1 as dead Less Unless (talk) 12:58, 24 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Struck part of the nomination above. The article presently has no bare urls, and this project no longer accepts requests for the addition of citations. North America1000 23:42, 11 January 2021 (UTC)


 * The Case of the Cautious Condor - A 1989 mystery adventure game. Tone issues, minimal citations, and the majority of the page's content is in the summary section . Waxworker (talk) 12:17, 23 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Struck part of the above. The article was expanded with the addition of sections, which addressed the matter of all its content formerly being in the lead section. Also, this project no longer accepts requests for the addition of citations. North America1000 23:39, 11 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Tolu' A Akinyemi - This article belongs to [|Living People] and requires cleanup because of improper citations and tone. Help reimprove.Thanks Olatunde Brain (talk) 21:12, 22 May 2020 (UTC)
 * - Article was under deletion review but has since been restored. Ghostofakina (talk) 22:21, 16 June 2020 (UTC)


 * List of Kamen Rider Ghost characters - List of characters from the series Kamen Rider Ghost, a live-action Japanese drama. Excessive uncited fancruft. Waxworker (talk) 18:27, 15 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Up for Grabs (play) - A 2000 play about the international art market. Page reads somewhat as an advertisement and has overall issues with tone and quality of citations. Waxworker (talk) 18:27, 15 May 2020 (UTC)
 * - Fixed bare URLs --  W ILD S TAR  talk  06:35, 21 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Dinny and the Witches - A satirical 1948 play. Overall issues with tone, formatting, and lack of sources . Waxworker (talk) 18:27, 15 May 2020 (UTC)
 * - added 3 refs, removed unreferenced tag.Less Unless (talk) 09:10, 16 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Struck part of the above. This project no longer accepts requests for the addition of citations. North America1000 23:44, 11 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Casanova (comics) - 2006 spy/espionage themed comic series. Uncited fancruft, minor formatting and tone issues. Waxworker (talk) 18:27, 15 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Roxlee: This is an article that must adhere to the biographies of living persons policy. It has multiple issues (see its templates), including containing highly promotional content and having virtually no reliable sources. I'm suspecting it may even violate the BLP policy. As such, it urgently needs cleanup. Please help by improving it, and/or correct me if I am wrong. MrSwagger21 (talk) 03:03, 6 May 2020 (UTC)
 * LGBT rights in Zambia - Some issues: duplicate information, citations in incorrect place, lack of coherence, uncited information. Mnonkes (talk)

April

 * Northanger Abbey -- too long, excessively detailed, needs to be written more cohesively. Tetrahedron17 (talk) 04:15, 25 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Despite being a lengthy article, much (but not all) of it is well-cited. The request above will require extensive copy editing, along with a cleanup editor willing to take what could be a fair amount of time to first learn a great deal about the novel before before embarking upon reducing the article. It is possible that the accommodation of this extensive request may not come into fruition here. Ultimately, this request, relative to the article, would be better suited for FP:GOCER, in my opinion. North America1000 18:11, 29 June 2020 (UTC)


 * Jamia Millia Islamia -- Indian public university. The page is written like the uni's info brochure. Tetrahedron17 (talk) 09:42, 23 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Democratic Socialists of America — major overuse of first-party sources leads to an article with no criticism that makes the organization sound way more significant than it is. See Talk:Democratic Socialists of America. DemonDays64 (talk) 14:23, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Armageddon – needs thorough copy-editing / revision; see there.--Hildeoc (talk) 19:57, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Staci Bilbo - American neuroscientist. The article is too long and needs to be shortened. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 14:07, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Select publications is still too long. Tetrahedron17 (talk) 18:14, 20 April 2020 (UTC)


 * Bullseye (mascot) — could be expanded, clean up confusing statements. DemonDays64 (talk) 01:56, 11 April 2020 (UTC)

March

 * World War I casualties — way too repetitive explaining the book by Erikman. I'm not sure how to make it more elegant, could someone please take a look? Thanks, DemonDays64 (talk) 18:50, 20 March 2020 (UTC)
 * C/2019 Y4 (ATLAS) – Requires some extensive copyediting for grammar as well as unreferenced and lengthy quotes. Nrco0e (talk) 03:35, 20 March 2020 (UTC)
 * Tricontinental Conference 1966 - lead section too long, multiple cases of references duplication. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:54, 13 March 2020 (UTC)
 * by MarialeegRVT and MiasmaEternal. Rosalina2427  (talk) 18:04, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

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Related WikiProjects
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 * WikiProject Guild of Copy Editors
 * WikiProject Unreferenced articles

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 * WikiProject Abandoned Articles
 * WikiProject Citation cleanup
 * WikiProject Copyright Cleanup
 * Cleanup Taskforce
 * Images for cleanup (listings)
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Tools

 * See also: list of tools hosted (or not) on Toolforge, FP:user scripts/List 

Below are some tools that can be useful in cleanup work. Feel free to edit this list.
 * AutoEd – automatically make clean-up changes in articles
 * reFill – edits bare url references: adds title, dates, publisher, etc.
 * IA Bot – marks dead external links (including references) and adds archived copies to live references
 * FPcleaner – helps fix various errors, including links to disambig pages (installable program)

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